Edit: messed with the picture a bit and made a few suggested changes. Probably nothing as major as the suggestions, and I doubt anybody could see the change. Just heightened the shading in the skin and took away the outline in the shadow.
Looks nice. I'm not sure how I feel about the pen line around the shadow though. It lind of makes it look like liquid instead of a shadow. Plus it creates a tangent with her pretty tail decoration thingy. If you have time to tweak her I'd suggest darkening the shadow and removing the outline.
I likes it, it has loads of bright colors and the pose is highly interesting. Though, she kind of looks like she's about to fall over, in which case her expression would be "FUCKIN GRAVITY!". My only other comment would be that you might want to add darker shadows in certain areas to show off the light source, but that's a minor thing.Very cools, I digs it like a mole.
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It was a last-minute decision to keep the shadow anyway. >.> But yeah, good suggestion.
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I enjoy falling over IMMENSELY btw.
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